Oryn Nindi Kritisia
K2/2013
- Write your experience in studying writing
I
am a part of English Department state university of Padang. I m a student in
K2. Last semester became the second semester for me. At the time, I studied
many subject. They were reading, listening, introduction to linguistics , and
also paragraph writing. Paragraph writing is a new subject in the second
semester. My friend and I studied with Mr. Saunir and Mrs. Fitrawati. At the
beginning of meeting, Mr. Saunir gave some introduction about paragraph
writing, and also Mrs. Fitrawati.
In
the second meeting, I started to study basic of paragraph. Ms. Fitrawati
explained about paragraph structure. What is topic sentence, supporting
sentence, and concluding sentence. In contrast, Mr. Saunir asked us to write
free paragraph. For the first time I wrote a paragraph, there were
difficulties. I lost my idea to write that paragraph. I did not find the topic
sentence. I also did not know what I am going to do. Not only about paragraph
writing, Mr.Saunir and Ms. Fitrawati
also taught about essay. They taught how to make an essay. Although, make an
essay is not easy, but I must do it. In addition, they always gave us
assignment to write an essay for each meeting.
When
I tried to make an essay, I followed some suggestions that I ever got from my
lecturer. I am going to catch the topic sentence. After I got the topic
sentence, I started to get the supporting sentences. It means, I read some
references to make the topic sentence to be through and to prove that
paragraph. I wrote some supporting details to develop and support the main idea
of paragraph. At the last of a paragraph, I put concluding sentence. The aim
of concluding sentence is to restates
the topic sentence with different word, and then I gave the reader important
point to remember. As a result, I was success make an essay.
You know I have already read these essay several time. You did a great progress since starting writing the drafts until these final essays,anyway.
BalasHapusImpressive, you've had progressed it well. Good
BalasHapusI think your essay is good, but i still found some grammatical error, maybe you can repair it again. :)
BalasHapusThat's a great essay, I guess, Oryin. Good job :)
BalasHapusyour story was good kk :D
BalasHapusbut, you need to pay attention at lexico-grammatical ;)
Uin, your essays are getting better for sure. Congrats girls.
BalasHapusit's quite good, but some sentences seem indonesian.. be carefull yaaa.. :0 go ahead
BalasHapusyou should add one paragraph again rin..
BalasHapusmore better...
Wow your essay was good Orin
BalasHapusYour essay was great Orin, but I suggest you to pay attention more in the gramatical and chose of words...:D
BalasHapusGood essay. It might be better if you revise your diction to make your sentences sound more natural
BalasHapusGood essay
BalasHapusI say thank you for all that has given me some suggestion
BalasHapus